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Friday, 8 November 2013

My Story Review By Fraser

Giving it a shot
WALT:We are learning to write a story Review
by David Tulloch

This story is about a girl named Lauren. She is lazy because all she does is sit down on her couch and start eating biscuits. Lauren  represented her school by taking part in Shot Put. She beat all her friends and even the older students at her school.

She was the best because she had lots of strength in her arms and muscles and her bones were as tough as a rock.She was  unbeatable and everyone said that she was unbeatable.

The characters in this story where Lauren,Nina,dad,the school students and mum.This story took place at Lauren’s school. I liked this story because it was about giving it a shot at different types of sports.


Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Multiplication Games On Study Ladder

Today after finishing my Maths activities, I went on Study ladder. I played a game where I had to answer twenty questions. It was my 10 times table. I got lots of answers correct in the game that I was playing. I only got one wrong.


Tuesday, 5 November 2013

Online Spelling Test

Today I went on a site called Spelling City. We had to spell words that were called out. I was very excited because when I finished I got 100% in spelling. I got a certificate for spelling.

Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Maths Game-Online

Maths Game Online by Fraser

During game time in maths I played this game. I used the number line to solve addition problems. It was so much fun learning addition through a game.

Friday, 18 October 2013

Persuasive Writing


Purpose: To argue the case for a point of view.
              : To attempt to convince the reader.

Structure: Open statement- introduce your point of view.

2.Arguments-point and evidence.

3.Conclusion-repeat your point of view.

Language Features: Present tense
                                : Connectives-because however,this

Should we have school uniforms?



For

We should wear school uniform because we all will look neat and tidy. We should wear school uniform because we look like we are apart of the school. We should wear school uniform because it shows what school we come from. We should wear school uniform because the uniform brings the school's name and we should treat it with respect.

We should wear uniform because some people don’t like wearing uniform.We should wear school uniform because people will think that we come from a respectful school. We should wear uniforms because when we are on a trip we won’t get lost and if you wear mufti you will get lost when you are on a trip.

We should wear uniform because people will know we come from a healthy caring sharing school. We should wear school uniforms because they will think we a from a smart school because we are wearing our school uniform. We should wear school uniform incase we are going to a music festival and they don’t know if we are actually from that school.

We should wear school uniform because a school is for studying and not showing your clothes to everyone to make and they will think that our school is a fashion show. We should wear school uniform because we look professional. We should wear school uniform because people will like you because your personality.

In my opinion we should wear school uniform because everyone knows we are representing our school and people will think we are responsible when we are out in the public. Everyone know’s we should wear school uniforms because everyone will know we have lots of knowledge  in our brain and we look brainy because we have our school uniform on.



We should wear school uniform because we look like we come from good and respectful families because they dress us up and make us look like we are respectful and we are responsible. We should wear school uniform because we are not wasting sheep wool.

We should wear school uniform because we look outstanding and beautiful and we look like we friendly and helpful. We should wear school uniform because we look like we use sportsmanship and work together to complete things.

We should wear school uniform because we show our personality to everyone and everyone will be kind to you. We should wear school uniform because if you treat them with respect they will treat you back kindly and with respect.

We should wear school because  it gives kids the sense of unity. We should wear school uniform because it shows the behavior and how they respect each and everyone. We should wear school uniform because.



We should wear school uniform because it is good for our schools. We should wear school uniform because every school has it. We should wear school uniform because we have to respect our school with treatment.



We should wear school  uniform because it gives kids opportunities to learn. We should wear school uniform because it is what we need to wear when we go to school. We should wear school uniform because everyone knows school uniform is good for you.



We should wear school uniform because it is our clothes and we should treat it with respect and treat it with responsibility. We should wear school uniform because it is what live for and what stands for the schools name.


We should wear school uniform because it is natural to the school. We should wear school uniform because if you wear normal clothes and when it is raining you will get wet. We should wear school uniform because if we go to another school they will know what school we come from.

Friday, 27 September 2013

Story Review

A Piece of Paradise by Leone Thorpe

 This story is about two Gods called the Rain God and the Sun God. The Sun God and the Rain God were arguing because they wanted to see whose plants grew bigger. When it was the end of the season they both gave up because all the crops needed some sunshine and some rain so they agreed that they needed help from each other to grow their food.

 The characters in this story are the Sun God and the Rain God. This story takes place in a faraway village.I liked this story because it was about helping people and helping the environment.

Friday, 13 September 2013

Aritcle Reveiw

WALT: To write a review of what we have read. A Passion for Pony’s by Donna Cherry This article is about a girl named Chelsea and her friend Sarah. They both had their own ponies. Chelsea’s pony was called Teddy. She kept Teddy in a paddock that was meant for ponies and horses. She liked going to the paddock after school to brush her pony so that he can be nice and clean. She liked taking her pony for a ride around the paddock. Every afternoon Chelsea and Sarah took their ponies over for the low jumps and trotted around the paddock. After that Chelsea gives him a final brush-down. Then she covers Teddy with a blanket to keep him warm at night. I liked this article because it had interesting words and it had lots of facts about ponies and how to look after ponies.